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Students · The RAFT Framework for Ethical AI Use

From AI feedback to your own revision

Use feedback to make decisions you understand. This worked example shows how to accept, adapt, and reject suggestions without handing over authorship.

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Start with your own evidence and draft

Source packet: 46 of 80 voluntary survey respondents want later library hours. One quiet room had 18, 22, and 20 of 24 seats occupied at 8 p.m. on three evenings. Staffing costs $40 per additional hour.

You already have a position and evidence to examine. Your draft also includes claims that go beyond what you have established.

Ask for critique with a boundary

Examine the feedback rather than obeying it

A suggestion can sound useful and still introduce unsupported information. Return to the packet and decide which advice actually helps your argument.

Before continuing

Which suggestion would you reject? Which requires a judgment rather than a fact check? Decide first, then compare your reasoning with the next page.

What should you do with “Add that later hours improve grades”?
Compare the revision decisions and final paragraph

Make and explain your revision decisions

SuggestionYour decision and reason
A · Survey limitsAccept. The packet says 46 of 80 voluntary respondents, not most students across campus.
B · A short pilotAdapt. A pilot is a reasonable proposal, not a finding in the sources. You must justify its scope and cost.
C · Jobs and gradesReject. Neither employment status nor academic achievement appears in the source packet.

Write again from verified notes

Close the AI output. List the evidence and the decision you can defend. Then write a new paragraph using your own organization and reasoning.

Why this revision is stronger

  • The survey’s denominator and voluntary participation are visible.
  • The recommendation is separated from the observations that motivate it.
  • The cost follows from 2 hours × 3 evenings × $40.
  • Claims about grades and employment were removed because the packet does not support them.

Keep the learning yours

Changing synonyms in an AI-written paragraph is not the same process. Here you checked evidence, selected a recommendation, rejected unsupported claims, and wrote the final reasoning yourself.

Retain your original attempt and a short revision rationale. Disclose the critique if required. Before submitting, explain why you chose a pilot and what additional evidence would change your recommendation.

By Dr. Chase Cookson · v2.1 (009019026)
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